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Twilight Magazine Cover by ~chariots-of-light:iconchariots-of-light:


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Submitted: March 7
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Full view for a better picture please!

So for my graphic design class, we had to redesign a pre-existing magazine cover, and then create a feature article.
I decided to redo ';Premiere' magazine, and make my feature article on Twilight :)

The article spread got messed up when I transferred it between computers, so I will try to fix that as soon as I can and upload it fr you guys :)

Comments/ feedback much appreciated!

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=Mizra:iconMizra: Mar 8, 2008, 5:41:19 PM Mood: dA Love
Nice work, but there are few things a little... off:

1. The "Premiere" name should be a little lower and brighter, unless the faded look is what you are going for.

2. I'd move the barcode up a bit, nudging to the right and to the top a little.

3. Watch the edges with your fonts; with magazines, the edge is a bit close and might get cut off when printed.

Overall, I think it's a good cover. I like the fact that you used the original font for Twilight and did a nice work treating(?) the photo of Kristen Stewart.

(P.S. - I'm excited about the movie, too!)

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- C.S. Lewis, The Last Battle
~chariots-of-light:iconchariots-of-light: Mar 8, 2008, 9:24:56 PM
Thank you so much! Yeah, I was kind of going for the faded look, I felt like it matched with the theme. Thanks for the constructive criticism and I'm glad you liked it :)

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Harry Potter - Twilight - Avatar The Last Airbender - Wicked
Because some people have lives (and I am not one of them)

Where I'm from we believe all sorts of things that aren't true. We call it - 'history.' - Wicked
=Mizra:iconMizra: Mar 9, 2008, 6:36:53 AM
I was hoping I wasn't being rude, but I'm glad you took it fine. It's good graphic design work, that's for sure. :)

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"The term is over; the holidays have begun. The dream has ended; this is the morning."
- C.S. Lewis, The Last Battle
~chariots-of-light:iconchariots-of-light: Mar 9, 2008, 2:15:06 PM
Oh, I know you weren't being rude! Thank you so much!

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Harry Potter - Twilight - Avatar The Last Airbender - Wicked
Because some people have lives (and I am not one of them)

Where I'm from we believe all sorts of things that aren't true. We call it - 'history.' - Wicked
~C0nfluence:iconC0nfluence: Mar 10, 2008, 4:28:26 PM
Very nice! :D
I agree with some of =Mizra's comments, but overall it looks pretty good! :D
I hope you got a good mark! You deserved it! :heart:

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The candles blew then disappeared,
The curtains flew then he appeared, saying don't be afraid,
Come on, baby.. and she had no fear,
And she ran to him.. then they started to fly.
They looked backward and said goodbye.. she had become like they are.
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~chariots-of-light:iconchariots-of-light: Mar 10, 2008, 8:03:54 PM
Thank you so much! I believe I got a 95 on the project, but it might have been a 92. I can't remember :)

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Harry Potter - Twilight - Avatar The Last Airbender - Wicked
Because some people have lives (and I am not one of them)

Where I'm from we believe all sorts of things that aren't true. We call it - 'history.' - Wicked
~C0nfluence:iconC0nfluence: Mar 13, 2008, 3:20:10 PM
Wow, fantastic! Good for you! :D

--
The candles blew then disappeared,
The curtains flew then he appeared, saying don't be afraid,
Come on, baby.. and she had no fear,
And she ran to him.. then they started to fly.
They looked backward and said goodbye.. she had become like they are.
E
~chariots-of-light:iconchariots-of-light: Mar 13, 2008, 6:02:08 PM
Thank you so much!

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Harry Potter - Twilight - Avatar The Last Airbender - Wicked
Because some people have lives (and I am not one of them)

Where I'm from we believe all sorts of things that aren't true. We call it - 'history.' - Wicked
~zutaralivson:iconzutaralivson: Mar 16, 2008, 9:29:41 PM
Nice! Sorry for the late comment ... but it's a way cool cover!

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