So for my graphic design class, we had to redesign a pre-existing magazine cover, and then create a feature article. I decided to redo 'remiere' magazine, and make my feature article on Twilight
The article spread got messed up when I transferred it between computers, so I will try to fix that as soon as I can and upload it fr you guys
Nice work, but there are few things a little... off:
1. The "Premiere" name should be a little lower and brighter, unless the faded look is what you are going for.
2. I'd move the barcode up a bit, nudging to the right and to the top a little.
3. Watch the edges with your fonts; with magazines, the edge is a bit close and might get cut off when printed.
Overall, I think it's a good cover. I like the fact that you used the original font for Twilight and did a nice work treating(?) the photo of Kristen Stewart.
(P.S. - I'm excited about the movie, too!)
-- "The term is over; the holidays have begun. The dream has ended; this is the morning." - C.S. Lewis, The Last Battle
Thank you so much! Yeah, I was kind of going for the faded look, I felt like it matched with the theme. Thanks for the constructive criticism and I'm glad you liked it
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Harry Potter - Twilight - Avatar The Last Airbender - Wicked Because some people have lives (and I am not one of them)
Where I'm from we believe all sorts of things that aren't true. We call it - 'history.' - Wicked
Very nice! I agree with some of =Mizra's comments, but overall it looks pretty good! I hope you got a good mark! You deserved it!
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The candles blew then disappeared, The curtains flew then he appeared, saying don't be afraid, Come on, baby.. and she had no fear, And she ran to him.. then they started to fly. They looked backward and said goodbye.. she had become like they are. E
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The candles blew then disappeared, The curtains flew then he appeared, saying don't be afraid, Come on, baby.. and she had no fear, And she ran to him.. then they started to fly. They looked backward and said goodbye.. she had become like they are. E
Devious Comments
1. The "Premiere" name should be a little lower and brighter, unless the faded look is what you are going for.
2. I'd move the barcode up a bit, nudging to the right and to the top a little.
3. Watch the edges with your fonts; with magazines, the edge is a bit close and might get cut off when printed.
Overall, I think it's a good cover. I like the fact that you used the original font for Twilight and did a nice work treating(?) the photo of Kristen Stewart.
(P.S. - I'm excited about the movie, too!)
--
"The term is over; the holidays have begun. The dream has ended; this is the morning."
- C.S. Lewis, The Last Battle
--
Harry Potter - Twilight - Avatar The Last Airbender - Wicked
Because some people have lives (and I am not one of them)
Where I'm from we believe all sorts of things that aren't true. We call it - 'history.' - Wicked
--
"The term is over; the holidays have begun. The dream has ended; this is the morning."
- C.S. Lewis, The Last Battle
--
Harry Potter - Twilight - Avatar The Last Airbender - Wicked
Because some people have lives (and I am not one of them)
Where I'm from we believe all sorts of things that aren't true. We call it - 'history.' - Wicked
I agree with some of =Mizra's comments, but overall it looks pretty good!
I hope you got a good mark! You deserved it!
--
The candles blew then disappeared,
The curtains flew then he appeared, saying don't be afraid,
Come on, baby.. and she had no fear,
And she ran to him.. then they started to fly.
They looked backward and said goodbye.. she had become like they are.
E
--
Harry Potter - Twilight - Avatar The Last Airbender - Wicked
Because some people have lives (and I am not one of them)
Where I'm from we believe all sorts of things that aren't true. We call it - 'history.' - Wicked
--
The candles blew then disappeared,
The curtains flew then he appeared, saying don't be afraid,
Come on, baby.. and she had no fear,
And she ran to him.. then they started to fly.
They looked backward and said goodbye.. she had become like they are.
E
--
Harry Potter - Twilight - Avatar The Last Airbender - Wicked
Because some people have lives (and I am not one of them)
Where I'm from we believe all sorts of things that aren't true. We call it - 'history.' - Wicked
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